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Sous la Pluie

Sous la Pluie

Photography Photography \ Figure | 04/11/07 @686 | pim-s | Comments critiques (12) | Views views (477)


Sous la Pluie
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Sous la Pluie...




a shot of two friends of mine, kissing under the rain...
I think they are just so cute!




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Avatar kittyKat

 04/11/07 @709

good photo and nice frame :)
 
Avatar cupcake

 04/11/07 @805

Excellent
:)
Top Mark
 
Avatar blackshad

 04/11/07 @922

background is overexposed
i would crop the top part so we cant see the balcony anymore
good capture :) +8
 
Avatar danheacock

 04/12/07 @959

also, you may want to crop off the right side a bit, that person in the background is distracting and takes away from the photo. nice border! keep it up.
 
Avatar Madanapale

 04/12/07 @042

Sweet!!....lovely capture!.....Can`t remember my last public kiss!...LOL
The bg is a little overexposed....agree about cropping.
Next time kill the intrusive people on the background.
Carlos
 
Avatar Inabottle

 04/12/07 @078

Im not especially fond of the round bubble things you added, but oh well, I agree about the exposure of the background a lil too bright... DIstracting from the apparent subject. other than that its a nice photo.
 
Avatar pim-s

 04/12/07 @397

thank you for your coments :)
yes I tryed to crop the bg, and it seems to me that it was better with the background, but I was wrong ;)

Inabottle: yes, they remove something to the picture but I think they add something more... ;)
 
Avatar Basw

 04/12/07 @414

Cool presentation, I like it. The effect at the top right is perfect, but maybe the white stripes at the bottom are a bit distracting.
Good job.
 
Avatar Lenn0

 04/12/07 @677

everything has already been said.
this reminds me a little of elliott erwitt's famous kiss-picture :)

very well done.
greets Lenny
 
Avatar BlackKitty

 04/14/07 @775

I'd say the balcony and other architecture make this shot more romantic, so keep it in! The exposure helps to give it a bit of a depth of field, and pushes the people forward in space, but it may be a little bright (maybe drop the contrast instead of brightening it).

Maybe redo the shot in the exact same location, same time of day, same pose and firends, but move them slightly to the left to obscure the trash cans in the back, and make sure nobody is to their right. behind them The amount of buildings is good at the top of the shot, but maybe compose it so that their faces are slightly above the center of the image.
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Avatar pim-s

 04/15/07 @980

thank you :)

you know it was a spontaneous shot, I just saw them kissing under the rain. it was just in front of our high school, so that's why there is poeple at the right...
I don't know if I'll take it again, I think it's because it's a spontaneous portrait that I like it...
indeed, I may use this concept again :)
thanks for comenting, but now I don't know what to do... should I drop the contrast, or delete the balcony?... ;)
 
Avatar BlackKitty

 04/16/07 @464

I'd vote to keep the balcony! It adds a romantic touch to it, and conjures up a feeling of an earlier, more nostalgic time. But then, I'd also say drop the contrast on the background a little bit, and see if you can darken the sky a little bit too. But just enough to not be so bright. :)
 
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GFXuser name:
   pim-s
Full Name:
  Nolwenn Maudet
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  06/06/1990 (18)
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